Diso Posted April 20, 2007 Posted April 20, 2007 Nicely Done. I liked it even though I got my butt kicked.
Shoma Posted April 22, 2007 Author Posted April 22, 2007 (edited) Alright, finally broke the 4,000 word barrier.....YAY!Anyway, i was wondering is there any suggestions for chapters 11 and up.MY plan sheet has up to ten for now. GUess it will be my first saga or volume.I already have the ending planned out but there has to be some suspense in the middle. Dbz does the whole suspense thing pretty well.BTW, could you all picture how the fight was going down in your head in the fight scenes? Edited April 22, 2007 by Shoma
Elazul Yagami Posted April 23, 2007 Posted April 23, 2007 more or less yes, but mainly because i know the avatars.if i didn't it would've been confusing.
Mooney Posted April 25, 2007 Posted April 25, 2007 I just started reading these, and I must say I find them very interesting. Keep on writing! BTW, chapter 3 wins the most.
Shoma Posted April 27, 2007 Author Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned)
DropDeadEd Posted April 27, 2007 Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned) You have a new character for the next chapter. Hint hint.
Diso Posted April 27, 2007 Posted April 27, 2007 Nice flashback to the whole story. I'd never thought I'd be working for that guy
Shoma Posted April 27, 2007 Author Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned) You have a new character for the next chapter. Hint hint. Know what Drop, you might be right! Or might not be....Hint hint. But seriously; if I'm gonna add anyone new it's gonna be after chapter ten because my plot is pretty much set until then. Don't worry lil buddy , you haven't been under the radar at all since you got here, but I'm bringing out the 1emu Veterans first^^.
DropDeadEd Posted April 27, 2007 Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned) You have a new character for the next chapter. Hint hint. Know what Drop, you might be right! Or might not be....Hint hint. But seriously; if I'm gonna add anyone new it's gonna be after chapter ten because my plot is pretty much set until then. Don't worry lil buddy , you haven't been under the radar at all since you got here, but I'm bringing out the 1emu Veterans first^^. Ah ok. Understood then. Very Nice Story by the way.
Shoma Posted April 28, 2007 Author Posted April 28, 2007 I just saw Jaeg posting; I haven't seen him around in awhile. Wonder if he even knows about it.
Lucandrake Posted April 29, 2007 Posted April 29, 2007 Hey good chapter!!! I want chapter 8 though, gimme!
Jaegermeister Posted April 29, 2007 Posted April 29, 2007 Nice Idea, lets start to read http://www.1emulation.com/forums/index.php...;blogid=27&site added to favorites
Shoma Posted April 29, 2007 Author Posted April 29, 2007 (edited) CHapTER PReview:Chapter 8 : Dont Blink! Quote: "Size doesn't matter, its the distance that will kill you...." Just a lil heads up because i keep re-writing it and its annoying!^^ Edited April 29, 2007 by Shoma
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