Alpha Posted March 30, 2004 Author Posted March 30, 2004 Here's another one I made since I'm a big fan of the song.."Stairway to heaven" - Led ZepplinI think I got the lyrics wrong on a part though, who cares.. Sing with me,With a louder tone and a drum stick slapping the drum,Feel the beat vibrate through your body, Sing for a year,With a guitar stroke and chimes slapping each other,Your mind setting the throttle to the climax, Sing for last,The heart of your feels like it will stop fast,The beat gets harder and harder,Your would stops at your feet, For the soul wants more, Sing for her,Screams louder, heart pacing at its max,Drums dribbling and guitars at its highest note,The peak of the song is here, do you hear it…. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Well there you go, this is a music poem incase you didn't know. I'm not a poet or anything, I just saw Havoc Forums with their poems section and I thought of making a thread like this. I've also visited a couple of poem forums to get ideas. If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together. And don't forget to read the board rules, I've already had to delete one poem.
Cominus Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 Rose are redViloets are bluethe shizzle is whackand so is this threadi come from the streetsiv'e been in the hoodflock this shizzleim going back to school. Word.... HAHAAHA That was off the shizzle for hizzle Cominus WORDLIFE LOL, you flocking said that wrong, it's off the hizzle for shizzle "off the hook for sure" not off the shizzle for hizzle. No worries, a polar bear would have corrected you anyways. Make a poem about Polar Bears and how they eat seals or something.
Gryph Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together.Set the trapTake a napDraw a mapOh, I'm such a sap I fell for my own trap.
Agozer Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together.Set the trapTake a napDraw a mapOh, I'm such a sap I fell for my own trap. I'll slap some words togetherTo see if something comes upNo, this is like trying to paint avant gardeNothing works or makes senseTouché
ForceX Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 Rose are redViloets are bluethe shizzle is whackand so is this threadi come from the streetsiv'e been in the hoodflock this shizzleim going back to school. Word.... HAHAAHA That was off the shizzle for hizzle Cominus WORDLIFE LOL, you flocking said that wrong, it's off the hizzle for shizzle "off the hook for sure" not off the shizzle for hizzle. No worries, a polar bear would have corrected you anyways. Make a poem about Polar Bears and how they eat seals or something. I meant to right it backwards ....its my spin on the Snoop Dogg Language...
Dragus Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 My Haiku Collection Grand Central--------------Away from the swamp,Into a tranquil meadow,I enjoy with you. Growth of Beauty.------------------From rivers to plains,Flourished sakura blossoms,Gaze and kiss so sweet. Distance no bound----------------A bond upon truth, Lives disregard of distance, You are in my heart. Guardian--------As far as you are, Distance can bar no limits, I am here always. Comfort--------Nearby when you sleep,A warm hand through the cold night,Never let you fall. Nature's Chaos----------Snow falls and sun shine,Altering to rain droplets,Yet the cold wind bites.
Gryph Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 I just wrote this while I was in Microbiology class. I call it Antibiotics. It's very geeky and very psuedointellectual. Antibiotics Vibrio, E.coli, SalmonellaHow terrible these bacteria are. Poison my food, poison my waterAntibiotics, they don't matter. Endotoxins, exotoxinsCause diarrhea or even a comaUnclean oysters, undercooked hamburgersAntibiotics, they don't matter.
Agozer Posted March 30, 2004 Posted March 30, 2004 (edited) It's very geeky and very psuedointellectual.I agree. Right down your alley. No, jk it's cool. Edited March 30, 2004 by Agozer
Ryuken Posted March 31, 2004 Posted March 31, 2004 Hmm... u guys r good so i'm gonna try to make a poem too Ryu and ken hittin each other with Shouryukenfighting their best they canlater on Akuma comes inand the whole scene gone dimcuz Akuma just used the raging demonand busted every 1 like a lemon feedbacks plz
2eyez Posted March 31, 2004 Posted March 31, 2004 i got roms, smc, bins, gba, and iso'si love my emulation more than h-oes from MAME to NeoRagei play my games all day i love emulation with a passionmuch props to those who do the hackin'whithout them none of this would happenso y'all stand up and shake their handand don't forget to celebrate with a heineken some day i know cps3 will be emulatedso as of now i'll chill and pray for that day
Gryph Posted March 31, 2004 Posted March 31, 2004 Hmm... u guys r good so i'm gonna try to make a poem too Ryu and ken hittin each other with Shouryukenfighting their best they canlater on Akuma comes inand the whole scene gone dimcuz Akuma just used the raging demonand busted every 1 like a lemon feedbacks plzThis one is the better of the two. I like it. But I don't know jack crap about poetry as you can see from the 2 poems that I've posted.
Ryuken Posted March 31, 2004 Posted March 31, 2004 thanx Mr.K.but i think ur poem just need to rhyme more then it would work but now it's kinda stupid. altho it's pretty good if u don't know jack crop about poetry
Gryph Posted April 1, 2004 Posted April 1, 2004 thanx Mr.K.but i think ur poem just need to rhyme more then it would work but now it's kinda stupid. altho it's pretty good if u don't know jack crop about poetryPoetry doesn't have to rhyme...that's such a 4th grade mentality. I know about the mechanics of poetry, but I don't know how to write it. And that's a big difference. Knowing how it works and actually getting it work are two different things.
Ryuken Posted April 1, 2004 Posted April 1, 2004 just so u know i'm still in 8th grade and i'm chinese so my english skills sux but anyway what u said is true ( knowing it don't mean u can working)
Gryph Posted April 1, 2004 Posted April 1, 2004 just so u know i'm still in 8th grade and i'm chinese so my english skills sux but anyway what u said is true ( knowing it don't mean u can working)Oh really, I didn't know you're Chinese. Your typing style is just like that of the average American teenager, but without all those insipid lols and Zs and Xs. Your English isn't bad at all.
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