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Desire to win

Fatal Rose


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K'Dash yells this to himself within his head, he is groggy, hurt, and

physically he wants out of this contest. But his opponent is

unrelenting. He will not stop until Ian is completely defeated. Ian is

facing the always dangerous Australian veteran Chaotica, Shoma is

watching and yelling out advice. "GET UP!" "HE IS EXHASUTED, TAKE

ADVANTAGE!" Ian understands what Shoma is saying, Chaotica has the

advantage but is utterly gassed, reason as to why he can't fully seize

the advantage over Ian and put him away for good. Ian is aware of his

opportunity but he can't seem to capitalize, to much pain, he is

bleeding from his nose, and he to be totally exhausted. Shoma screams

at him again "THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE!" A sudden surge of

desperation came over Ian, while realizing this is in fact his last chance and

losing here would drop him down in the rankings and end his undefeated

streak. He somehow manages to get back to his feet, "This is a gut

check." he thinks to himself. He now has two opponents to fight,

Chaotica, and the wear and tare of his brutally battered and beat down

physical state. Chaotica runs forth, readying his final blow, he

telegraphs due to being physically spent. Ian can see the blow coming

and evades delivering a side stepping defensive move at the same time,

which was a double axe handle smash to the chest. It sends Chaotica reeling and

down to one knee tired and hurt. Ian knows this is his one chance to

end the fight, he runs forth and delivers his signature 'Shining

Wizard' maneuver, his knee/shin area crashes into the side of

Chaotica's head, knocking him out completely. Ian regains his footing

and notices his fallen opponent has been put to sleep. He screams in

celebration and the crowd roars in approval. He is about to collapse

but Shoma rushes over and catches him before he falls. Shoma is

incredibly worried about Ian's health after such a grueling match, Ian

looks at Shoma as if nothing is wrong with a brash smirk on his young

face saying "looks like we have an update to my highlight reel", Shoma

laughs and helps Ian collect the prize money as they leave the

underground New York arena.


"So how did he do Shoma?"

"He won barely.."

"But he still won right?!"

"That's right."

"Hey Axl our boy Ian won, he is still undefeated!"

"Ok man well I gotta go, we are about to catch the next flight back to

Montreal, see you soon."

"Bye Shoma, tell K congrats on still being undefeated,"

"Sure thing, bye Diso."

"See ya."


Right after Shoma closed his cell Ian came walking up slowly with

somewhat of a limp.

"Back from the souvenir shop I see? "

"Yeah nigga, had to get a few things. Not often that I visit the states."

"Don't say nigga, foo! You aint black!"

"Eh.. Sorry man. Online joke chat sometimes carries over to real life."

"It's cool man, just flocking with you."

"Heh, don't come at me like that man after a fight, I am still a bit

on edge and feel a little shaken up, good God that was a tough fight…"

K begins to fall deep into thought, Shoma begins to suspect if that

fight has taken more than just a physical toll on his friend.

"Lets get on the plain bud, we can recollect on our time here on our

six hour flight."

"Alright man, lets go."

K was mostly quiet the entire flight, aside from a few short words

here and there and the occasional small talk not much was said. Shoma

(one of his best friends) did not say much either. The flight was long

and tiresome, K's injuries seem to stiffen up a bit, causing him

extreme pain once he stood up to use the restroom. Shoma was very

happy for Ian, winning such a big fight over a well known opponent in

the underground circuit. Yet he was deeply disappointed in himself, he

was defeated that night by fellow fighting upstart Agozer, a

Kung Fu master from Finland. Not only was he beaten, he was

humiliated. The fight was a huge mismatch and Shoma was easily beaten.

The flight was boring, eventually they arrived at the airport greeted

by there close friends/roomates Disoblige and Axl. Disoblige is a

young fit Chinese man, dresses very normal/casual, wears glasses and

always has a nervous smile on his face. Axl on the other hand has a

exotic European look to him, he hails from Romania, his wealthy

parents funded his world wide education, he has received schooling in

England, Ireland, and now Canada. He has black eyeliner on with

bleached blond hair, a lip piercing to on the left side of his bottom

lip. He is stylishly dressed in what many may label as "Emo".

Both rushed over to K and group hugged him, congratulating him on his

huge upset victory. Disoblige then put his hand on Shoma's shoulder

and told him in a sympathetic voice "Hey man don't beat yourself up

over this, it's just one loss man, you can bounce back from this!"

"I was knocked out in 15 seconds man…"

Axl lightly punches Shoma on the left arm.

"Come on man, look at the bright side Shoma, at least your not all

flocked up like K, he fought for over 8 minutes, nearly got himself


Disoblige then whispered to Axl, "You moron, that's not going to cheer

him up you idiot!"

Disoblige puts his arm around Shoma and tells everyone "Come on guys,

lets go hit the pub, we all could use a drink."

Axl looked at Disoblige with an awkward look on his face and said

"Fool, you don't even drink."

"But you guys do, I am sure they have soda there anyways right?"


"Hashanah flock you K, alright guys lets go."


They arrived at Cinders Internet Cafe Bar. "This is such a unique

place" said Axl. "I mean you find all types here, nerds, hoods,

Mafioso's, metro's, Gothic's, and us. Never a dull night at Cindy's".

"Don't let the club owner or any of his cronies hear you say that."

"Don't be a little biatch Diso, not like I can't take care of myself.

Besides he is most likely some little hacker basement troll, I doubt

the rumors about him are true."

"Well I would hate to find out the hard way, lets just have a good

time ok? No bar fights please."

Axl rolls his eyes and heads over to the bar, Diso finds a table and

saves it for them while they order drinks. His eyes begin to wonder,

scouting the entire room, seeing if there is anyone to watch out

for/avoid. The atmosphere is diverse, Goths to the left, nerds/casual

people all over, trendy dressed people, some guy across the bar all

steroids up playing pool. Pretty much any type of person you would

find in Canada is in here. It's a Thursday night, the place is busy so

his friends are taking somewhat of a long time at the bar. So his eyes

continue to wonder until they aught a brief glimpse of a perfect

beauty. Or at least he thought that's what he has seen, so he quickly

started looking around, searching for her. There she was leaning

against the bar, he gazed at her side profile, everything was

perfectly well developed in all the most desirable aspects of a

woman's body.


He could just not stop staring, she turned and now was facing his

direction. She did not notice him. Disoblige has always been a shy

person, but this time he felt something burning inside, he knew that

passing this up would bother him for the rest of his life. K, Axl, and

Shoma arrived back with the drinks.

"Here is everyone's drinks, Axl had the cranberry and vodka, K has the

adios, and I got the Heineken. Who the flock would order a soda in a

bar? Oh yeah that's Diso's drink." Everyone begins to laugh but Diso's

eyes are too fixated on the true matter at hand (of approaching the

most beautiful girl he has ever seen) to really listen to whatever

ribbing his friends have going on.

"I'll be right back."

"Dude, what the flock! We just got back from the bar with our drinks, I

paid for your damn soda. Do you know how embarrassing it is to order a

damn SODA at a BAR?"

"Chill Shoma, I'll brb."

"Did you just say 'brb'?

"Ummm….. Yes, whatever."

"Why do you keep looking in that direction?"

"I'm not K, look guys I'll be right back ok?"

"Wait I know what he is looking at, or should I say WHO he is looking

at hahahah"

"Axl, please stfu ok? I will be back, I just want to walk around for a bit."

"Okay captain obvious, what should I do with your drink?"

"If the ice melts Shoma I will pay you back, see you guys in a bit."

Diso walks off towards the right side of the bar tenders table. Where

the girl is still leaning against.

"Is he walking up to that sexy chick at the corner of the bar? The one

with the plaid skirt and sexy body Axl?"


"has he got a chance."

"None at all."

"haha never thought I see the day, Diso is actually going up to a

girl. Never thought he would gather up his balls and do it. Why in

Gods name did he have to pick the hottest one in the bar? Hahaha"

"Aw crap man he is going to make an absolute fool out of himself,

should we go easy on him after he gets humiliated and rejected?"

All three at the same time said "Heellllll NO!" Group laughter ensued.

As Diso headed towards the bar he felt a heavy pit in his stomach, he

began to shiver a little, his heart was beating like crazy and he felt

his face turning bright red. Before he knew it he was standing right

next to her, trying to act casual/suave/cool. She noticed him, she had

a feeling he was there for her. Diso began to think to himself, "What

the hell am I going to say?" She began to speak to the bartender, he

could not hear exactly what she asked for. Before the bartender could

see to her order he quickly got her attention, "Madam." She turned her

head swiftly to see who actually called her madam, Diso quickly said

"I'll have the same please." "She smiled at him and said "coming right

up sir.".


"Wow, not many share my taste in drinks, I'm surprised to be honest.

Not many can handle it."

Diso thinks "Aw crap." to himself, all he herd was some exotic

sounding mixed drink. He laughed nervously and smiled at her, not

saying anything, just stared into her beautiful eyes.

She looked back at him in a friendly calm way.

Meanwhile from not to far his friends were watching from there table, laughing.

"This fool is just staring at her hahahaah, he's not saying anything,

making a fool of himself."

They began to laugh so loudly that Diso began to notice it, it

distracted him a bit, messed up his train of thought. She began to

look away then back at him, she started to feel awkward because he

just kept staring without saying anything. Diso finally managed to

mutter something

He began to speak in an uncharacteristic suave type voice.

"So uh, can I get you a drink lady?

Diso thinks to himself "Why the flock did I just say that?"

"Well I kinda already ordered my drink remember? You asked for the

same, I was shocked that you also drank it."

"Oh yeah. crap I'm sorry. Well can I pay for it?"

"ummmm… Well if you insist I guess…"

"Ok I will" Diso said with a smile.

An older man from a far off distance is at the other end of the bar he

is sitting and staring at Diso talk to this young woman. He is

somewhat engulfed in shadow, his white strip of hair on his head

stands out, his hair is long, his eyes look as if they have been

through it all. He also has grayed hair within his trimmed beard. He

is watching, waiting…


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The rival has finally arose from the depths of suspense!Bravo! Figured I would get owned, lol.
No rivalry at all my friend, nothing like that. Your story is much better.
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