Shoma
Aug 9 2009, 10:56 PM
Alrighty! Like before, I've waited til the second chapter to put this up and see if Im interested in doing a whole volume and I kinda feel like going for it so I bore another 1Emu Exclusive Fanfiction featuring our members in a totally new universe than 1emuAdventure. Wont be as much superhero stuff in this one so people will be realistically fragile but I gotta throw some supernatural phenom in there somewhere^^!
Detective Inky - A quick talking, potty-mouthed investigator who is pretty famous for his cases is now being employed by a luscious women named Hera. She seems shady, and Inky isnt too far from that POV as well and so we unravel the mystery while discovering who Inky was... and really is.
That's all you're getting from this, and for those who are familiar with the previous stories, updates and commentaries will all work under the same rubric. After reading please post thoughts, and as far discussions, please post here!
YOSHAAA! Mystery isnt my forte, but heck, that's the joy of writing! Time to friggin learn through practice!
Detective Inky series begins....NOW!
(any requests to be put in, please post it here and try not to change avatars every few weeks.)
Weirdy
Aug 10 2009, 03:39 AM
ok :s
emsley
Aug 10 2009, 10:53 AM
Suggestion: Inky must have a desert eagle that he uses when he does not get the answers he wants.
Shoma
Aug 10 2009, 08:56 PM
QUOTE (emsley @ Aug 10 2009, 06:53 AM)

Suggestion: Inky must have a desert eagle that he uses when he does not get the answers he wants.
that can b arranged^^.
Hera
Aug 11 2009, 05:13 AM
I like being a mysterious, sexy badass. Just don't turn me into a tranny
Shoma
Aug 11 2009, 06:19 AM
Hera
Aug 12 2009, 02:11 AM
LMAO
Black Knight is my ex bf's "alter ego"...the thinks he's a superhero. Will met him once.
Shoma
Aug 12 2009, 04:09 AM
QUOTE (Hera @ Aug 11 2009, 10:11 PM)

LMAO
Black Knight is my ex bf's "alter ego"...the thinks he's a superhero. Will met him once.
Then his alter ego is awesome, lol!
Hera
Aug 12 2009, 04:15 AM
QUOTE (Shoma @ Aug 12 2009, 12:09 AM)

QUOTE (Hera @ Aug 11 2009, 10:11 PM)

LMAO
Black Knight is my ex bf's "alter ego"...the thinks he's a superhero. Will met him once.
Then his alter ego is awesome, lol!
No...no it isn't.
It's totally not like yours haha
Shoma
Aug 12 2009, 07:30 PM
I always loved villains with that kinda persona. Except when they're weak; without realizing I've already grown to like the BlackKnight character(wasnt expecting him to have much face time but now that may change).
Shoma
Aug 21 2009, 04:30 AM
Here's a rough draft of my cover art for the first 5 chapters. I was kinda lazy with this one and so i just rushed through it but I assure you the next one will have a much sexier Hera.
So here it is:
Shoma
Aug 22 2009, 05:11 AM
emsley
Aug 22 2009, 08:43 PM
I vote for violence! Inky to shoot a baby or some shit like that omething tabbo and crazy plz kthnx (love the drawings shoma)
Shoma
Aug 23 2009, 04:31 AM
QUOTE (emsley @ Aug 22 2009, 04:43 PM)

(love the drawings shoma)
*Touched*
Shoma
Sep 2 2009, 03:57 AM
Shoma
Sep 2 2009, 07:25 PM
So 5 chapters down, Im sure no one is sure what the heck is going on but you gotta put your pieces together first.
Anyway, how are the readers liking the series so far?
emsley
Sep 2 2009, 09:26 PM
Im amazed.
Shoma
Sep 3 2009, 01:04 AM
QUOTE (emsley @ Sep 2 2009, 05:26 PM)

Im amazed.
Im amazed b y your reply. TY
I tried to use comedy for this one, but i have a certain unpopular taste so maybe it was hit and miss.
Shoma
Oct 15 2009, 06:15 AM
Shoma
Oct 19 2009, 08:39 PM
Okay, not an update I'm afraid, but since we're at the half mark, I wanted to get some vital feedback.
So instead of making a whole new thread(like I did for the 1EmuAd series) I'll just put it up on this one.
So who's still with me!?
So how do we feel about the work so far? Who tried to, but couldn't get into it? Who realized its not like the previous and said screw it? Or "other"? Let da pple be heard...
Shoma
Nov 18 2009, 09:16 PM
emsley
Nov 18 2009, 09:26 PM
Make him shoot a kid by accident then he can slip into a suicide mood and just go round been total bad ass.
yay!
emsley
Nov 18 2009, 10:22 PM
Here:

Inky gets armed.


Unlucky john.
the antidote.

The problem.
GO!
Shoma
Nov 22 2009, 01:56 AM
You're insane sir, lol
Shoma
Dec 23 2009, 04:51 AM
Shoma
Dec 23 2009, 08:19 PM
DO any of the readers have any ideas as to who is trying to kill Inky?
emsley
Dec 23 2009, 11:53 PM
No.
Shoma
Dec 24 2009, 02:42 AM
Then at least its not so black and white, cool.
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